domingo, 14 de agosto de 2016

Hi! My name is Anapaula, but my friends call me Pala. I don't know why but I have already gotten used to it. I am 19 years old. I was born in Monterrey on July 4th 1997.  I like to exercise. I play volleyball. I like to watch movies and go to parties with my friends. I like to spend my weekends with my family. I have a dog and its name is Polly. She is black and likes to eat potato chips. I have two best friends. Their names are Bannia and Cristina.
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  1. Unknown15 de agosto de 2016 a las 9:28

    Hello Pala,
    Thank you for using the correct format. You have some errors you need to correct. (The errors are in parentheses) and THE CORRECT FORMS ARE CAPITALIZED)
    Lines 1 and 2: why, (comma) but I (already get used) HAVE ALREADY GOTTEN USED to it. I am 19 years old. I was born (on) IN Monterrey (in) ON July 4th 1997. I like to (excercise) EXERCISE.
    Line : ...(like) LIKES to (it) EAT potato chips.
    See you in class.
    Ms. Martinez

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